There is a screenwriting discussion list which has a number of people
subscribed with experience writing real screenplays.  Send to
listserve@tamvm1 the following message SUB SCRNWRIT Brian Sealy
 
That should do it.  And Jack Stanley, the moderator, would love
to have someone to respond to.  Most of the people on the list just
read the good things Jack posts.
 
Good luck to your friend
 
Molly Archibold
marchibold@mscd